In 1999 in the Dominican Republic it was a nice morning I wake up and my friend came to my house looking for me, to go to tplay baseball we were gonna meet up with the other players on the park. but there were a crazy guy that play to much he came runing and start playing with rocks "like hiting the rock with the bat".
One rock went straigth to my head and cut me. I start to bleeding one of the guy said to take me home and they took me. the guy that hit me was scare because he thought I was gonna die. my mother called my father and told him what happen he came home and took me to the hospital the doctor clean the cut and put me 4 stichers and sent me home. In 2 weeks I was playing baseball with my friend again.
3 comments:
I don't want to be rude but i have to be honest that you have a lot of mistakes in that paragraph.
Be careful next time and change those mistakes.
It's still a great story of you.
I like your story but you should of add more details to it :)
Dude i am sorry, but it doesnt make sense, but still did a great job and need to add more details alot more details.
please comment my story becuase you haved comment the wrong story
please check my blog.
Post a Comment